Changeset 3240 for production/onslow_2006/report/introduction.tex

Timestamp:

Jun 26, 2006, 10:15:11 PM (19 years ago)

Author:

sexton

Message:

textual updates

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• production/onslow_2006/report/introduction.tex (modified) (2 diffs)

production/onslow_2006/report/introduction.tex

@@ -14 +14 @@
 
 This report is the first in a series of studies which 
-becomes a component of the suite of tsunami assessments for the North West
+go towards building the suite of tsunami assessments for the North West
 Shelf. 
 Subsequent reports will not only
@@ -32 +32 @@
 The report will outline the methods of modelling the tsunami from its 
 source to its impact ashore and present the predicted consequences. 
-Section \ref{sec:tsunamiscenario} provides
-the background to the scenario used for this study. Whilst 
-the return period of this scenario is unknown, it
-can be be classed as a plausible event, see Section \ref{sec:tsunamiscenario}. 
+The scenario used for this study has an unknown 
+return period, however it
+can be classed as a plausible event, see Section \ref{sec:tsunamiscenario}. 
 Future studies
 will present a series of scenarios for a range of return periods to